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IndisGuise
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Posted on 03-22-06 2:39
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As I packed my bags, Suitcases filled with cloths And my modest belongings My precious plants, framed pictures, and old souvenirs All neatly boxed, wrapped and ready to be shipped Tired, I sit on my couch Thirstily I raise a bottle of water and gulp My eyes flutter - could it be a sign? I laid on my bed, closed my eyes, And then slowly raised my eyelids On the corner, next to the closet I saw a white plastic bag Neglected, wearied, dusty and torn I stared at it for a moment Heartbeat loud, paced faster As if it is you in front of me Stupid me! Slowly to the corner, I picked - opened You smile from the top of the piles You have not changed How can you? This was a mere picture It does not change Unlike you... And me... Then there was this other one, between friends How that camera caught us stealing those glance And remember the one in which you cried? I kept on teasing you until you dried. Those letters with few words Inks faded, hardly readable But amazingly, it's engraved, In my soul How is it possible? I do not even love you anymore.
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dreamz05
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Posted on 03-22-06 2:45
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IndisGuise
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Posted on 03-22-06 2:46
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2 Your vivid laughter - my efforts My mischief - your rolling eyes Now, Remembering how I tried to make you smile Makes me smile, Never knew - my efforts then Would pay off so handsomely :) I have not smiled for a long time -- you know! ***
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IndisGuise
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Posted on 03-22-06 2:52
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3 I did not change that old-white-torn bag. I just put it in a new one So that those memoirs do not fall off And it can hide those precious moments For another day, another time Until I move again And I find it right on the corner of my room And for a moment, it'll again Take me back in time Take me to you And I lose myself Until, Reality yanks me off my slumber Lumped throat, I gulped the whole bottle Heart wrenched, soul tugged I managed a smile - poignant Feeble - defeated And I rolled my eyes over my room All done - neatly packed - ready to move To a better, bigger place The ironies of "moving" And its pushing me to bygones Compelling me to slobbery... ***
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Posted on 03-22-06 2:54
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Indi bro: It is nice although I am not sure whether I got the whole point. But one thing I got is you shouldn't have done that what you did - you don't love her any more. That would be okay if she does the same, have you ever checked back from her?
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IndisGuise
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Posted on 03-22-06 3:00
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4 When every step I take to move away Brings me back closer Sometimes I wonder Do I move - just for these moment of closeness? I can be illogical at times Contradict my maturity You make me I gladly But I can always gather myself Face the facts boldly, Stride by stride, to my dreams I am strong -- an achiever I can move on Is not that what you said to me? See! I have. Now I would close my pen And again you will be history And I wear my mask Strong, cheerful, and content... Is not that what you wanted me to be? ******************** Chronicles - Moving!!!*********************** Ends here for today! :)
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Posted on 03-22-06 3:06
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awww.. Indis! :P Very nice but nevermind! :P and only for you - (wink,wink) :)
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IndisGuise
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Posted on 03-22-06 3:31
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Thank you Dreamz05 :) ----------------- Purush bro, You know when we move from one place to another, especially as we all are trying to make the most of the circumstances? And then how we stumble along few seemingly unimportant, forgotten belongings that we have - up until that point, and then you feel it has always been a part of you. While we pack all the current assets that we have to carry forward - move to new place - an old plastic bag, in my place, resembling trash, but held priceless memoirs stopped me for a moment that compelled me to slobbery. There is nothing to check, nothing to ask and tell. Let the past bury the dead! "Strong, cheerful, and content Is not that what you wanted me to be?" ----------------------- Nails fuchi, I have no mind to mind, but never-mind! :p Wink-wink ---------> back at you;) IndisGuise:) P.S: " - IndisGuise " Mathi sign off garnai birse chu:P
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Posted on 03-22-06 3:33
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awww indisguise dont' break her heart by calling her "fuchi". she has been head over heels in crush with you
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IndisGuise
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Posted on 03-22-06 3:57
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lfc sweetie, - assumptions can be deadly at times. Head over heels in "crush" with you re? LOL. Kya paraphrase gardeko hahahaha. :) She indeed is a sweetheart - as is evident by the volume of people she spelled her charm seems to grow din duiguna raat chauguna :) IndisGuise:) P.S: Aja feri posting sakio jasto cha... YESSSSSSSSSS I did it again! :D hahaha
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Posted on 03-22-06 4:52
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hey indi bro...seems like ur back from ur 'vacation'?or u in vacation now ?hehe..well..more alive now k(seems this 'k' word is the trend here these days..and u know me bandwagon jumper ;oP ehe)... anyways..ke bhanney?..would have offered u some ..err dil jaley drnk if u stopped over here (heard u wanna go on a world tour?;oP hehe any plans to see some kangaroos?wallabies?or koalas?..not that they are great to see etc..thats me opinion ;oP hehe..).. la la before me cant stop meself(tends to happen doesnt it?:o| hehe)..hope to see more Movin on hai ;o)..on this chronicle k!duh!;oP hehe.. dyam now im lookn foward to cleanin the house re kya(its me turn to do it today :oS)..maybe ma pani ke ke paucha hola..in those corners..;oP...wish me luck re kya ;oP hehe... good day indi bro :oD...(good to have 20limit hoina?;oP ..if i could i would let u have mine..tanna excess cha :oS..kya waste :oS ..as tho u want it ;oP hehe but u know!im offering!free ni!duh!;oP..oops i see ur still posting :o| ..la la time to begone..and i thot it was safe to type re kya ;oP) good day again :oD...
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Posted on 03-22-06 8:17
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Indis, Mere picture thrown on a heap of trash compelled to bring back all the memories huh! You writing is phenomenal. MEMORIES sweet and painful at times. like fallen leaves and dormant trees no one knows what lies behind, but hope hope that the rainbow will render your odyssey creating new stories to tell and leaving all the memories behind some to cherish and some to bury. Keep coming!
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Posted on 03-22-06 8:28
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Typos- should be your writing instead of you writing Apologies...
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IndisGuise
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Posted on 03-23-06 11:06
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Hey Dannynomous bro, Many thanks for dropping by. Yes I do actually harbor the hope to see few Kangaroos sometime next year. Perhaps we can lie in Bondi beach and watch those astutely carved females shake- that-thing while we sip some chiso chiso beer. Ke cha bichar? ;) At night we can hit Cave - and perhaps go on for morning clubbing - all in the name of "Diljale daru." "Kaun kabakht peene ke liye jita hein. Hum to peete hein is liye ki ji sake...paroo ko bhula sake..." Aaaach.....hahahaha.. Damn...bejod cha dialog. :p Sorry, my limit hit the ceiling - as my fingers got itchy and I posted in that other stupid threads, which are of course my favorites. :) I hope to catch a glimpse of the utopia that people felt when Roosters got the better of the team from the nation of All Blacks few years back. Never seen a footie game in person, thus perhaps that should be in my laundry list. It is always safe - no bird flue symptoms here.:) Good day bro ;) -------------------------------------------------------------------- Mademoiselle in an advantageous summit! Phewwww... what a phrase befittingly!!!:) I tend to enjoy your comments more than my postings. That thami thami - daabi daabi and radha and mohan was from the top drawer :)) Regarding the afore-posted "Chronicles - Moving" - I am sorry to have confused you little bit. It was not a trash, but akin to one. It was a while plastic bag that I had which kept all my old belongings - pictures, few letters, cards, small gifts, some notes, my old diary (goes back to 1994 - I wrote some stupid things :p, but I was way too young, so... ;)), and others mundane stuffs which perhaps does not have any value but I just have not let it go for the heck of it. (Am I trying to convince myself?;) hehehe So yes, it was that old bag which I set aside in the corner behind the closet and moved on, never being bothered to go thru it for long time. It was torn; maybe the closet shoved battered and pushed it as it tried to come forth for me to spare a glance. :) I think everyone, every once in a while, especially while moving from one place to another everyone finds something that takes them back or reminds them of something that compels one to reminisce. It could be picture, old cloth, frames, gifts, letters, cards or anything else that has symbolic value. Is it only me or does others go thru the same experience of encountering those stuffs and dig thru the pile and just live the past for a moment? Does it not happen to everyone - I wonder? Or am I practicing soliloquy? Oh well! IndisGuise:)
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IndisGuise
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Posted on 03-23-06 11:12
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It was a white plastic bag * I think everyone, every once in a while, especially while moving from one place to another finds something that takes ...* Do others go thru.............* Gazillion typos... spare me the blushes... :)
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Posted on 03-23-06 11:19
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incredible, I am yanked by reality more than you are indi.....incredible.
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Lemon
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Posted on 03-23-06 11:33
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Posted on 03-23-06 11:35
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Simply amazing. I did find money once i was moving. Boy wasn't I happy eventhoug it was my money. Whenever I am moving, I go through all the old clothes and try to trash em, but just can not. It takes me back to my high school days and many more.
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Lemon
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Posted on 03-23-06 11:40
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Vantage Point----> timro pani ekdum ramro cha :)
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IndisGuise
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Posted on 03-23-06 11:40
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We all have our demons to hide hoina ta John? Prettier the demon is, tougher it is to hide. At times, reality seems surreal and vice-versa. May be I shall steal the thunder from the mountain and get high high high... before I become "the old man down the road" eh! Many thanks for dropping by. Take care bro.
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